Wish's BHA4 Judging - Unworldly Manifestations -=Foxigami's Entry=- Rubric: -20 points per pattern - 10 points to creativity and pattern aesthetics, 10 points to fun factor and pattern design. -30 points towards general aesthetics, sound, and polish. (For the record, *average* aesthetics is essentially the defaults per engine, and is at around a 6/10 per category) -(Usual contest-specific bonuses will be omitted due to contest theme being OCs lol) At the end, the total points will be divided by the total possible points, and then multiplied by to get your final score. Memez. Nonspell 1: 9/20 I can stand still in the center and dodge the whole thing. Otherwise it looks fine. 6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 3/10 - Fun/Design Butterfly Effect "Regretful Prison": 8/20 Cool concept but I hate its execution. There's little warning, if you move a bit it gets absurd, if you don't move much it's piss easy. 7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 1/10 - Fun/Design Nonspell 2: 16/20 Ok this is MUCH better, looks cooler than the first non and you have to actually dodge it too. It's interesting too, look at that! Nice work! 8/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 8/10 - Fun/Design Dimensional Traps "Creeping Walls": 10/20 Well... it does what it sets out to do and looks fine. I just don't really care about it. 6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 4/10 - Fun/Design Nonspell 3: 11/20 Hmmm... this would be a lot better if there was ANY sort of tell as to where the cyan bullets would go. It looks really nice but the cyan bullets destroy it. 7/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 4/10 - Fun/Design Bad Memories: "Get Stickbuged[sic] Lol": 12/20 Ok that actually got me pretty good. Really creative idea. The dodging is meh. 9/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 3/10 - Fun/Design The CHains That Shackel[sic] Us: 9/20 This spell title is *extremely* "I'm 14 and this is deep" energy. It's a neat idea (hi Len'en Monochrome) but it's WAYYYYY too long. I was bored by the end and the dodging wasn't amazing. 6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 3/10 - Fun/Design Makai's Magical Treasure: "Mystic Square": 12/20 The buildup on this attack is slower than FFXIV's A Realm Reborn part (read: extremely slow) but it's got a satisfying to dodge final phase. Looks ok, Demarcation lol 6/10 - Creativity/Aesthetics, 6/10 - Fun/Design AESTHETIC: 17/30 Looks: Standard. 6/10 Sound: The volume balancing is unusual in places, otherwise standard. 5/10 Polish: You might want to break free of The Most Glorious Treasure and AJS' system cuz I think it's holding you back lol. Average. 6/10 SUM OF PATTERNS: 87/160 AESTHETIC: 17/30 TOTAL: 104/190 * 25 = 13.68/25 This script uh...exists! I honestly have no idea how to feel about it. You've definitely got potential, but a bunch of these attacks are too memey and/or don't have enough testing. You can definitely do better than this, keep at it!