RaNGE Danmaku Contest 14 ~ Popular Popularity! Contestant : AchySolrock Script : Popular Popularity Marisa - by Achy version 1.1 (Marisa) Judged by TalosMistake My Judging Criteria Danmaku - Worth 15 points Visual & Effect - Worth 3 points Others (Difficulty,Aesthetics) - Worth 2 points Total Score = 20 // Extra Credit (Stage,Midboss,Player,Gimmick,etc) Worth 1 points. Will count to your final score Important Note I'm not a native english speaker,so I apologize in advance for any grammatical mistakes and/or uncleared words or phases I use. If you have any questions about my judging, feel free to PM me via MotK forum. <-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------> -Danmaku- (15 point) Non-spell 1 : I like this. It's quite good for marisa non-spell. [12.5/15] Light Conversion "Aurora to Moonlight" Pretty neat concept. Good execution on star bullets. My only complaint is that Marisa is very hard to hit [16/20] Non-spell 2 : It's ok. I know there're some of patterns there,but overall it still look a bit random [12/15] Stargazing "Past View from the Present" The first phase where Marisa swapping places with other familiar is perplexed. I don't understand the gimmick behind them I mean... there're 3 familiars and Marisa. For each wave, 1/4 of them will fire danmaku, but I don't know WHICH one will fire. Sometimes, it got me because I was standing right there (I'm sorry if there's some trick behind this, but I failed to see them) The second phase is refreshing. Although, not much go on there except the bursts of red stars/green pellets/blue pellets/whatever came to you at the same time.Nevertheless, I love the way you manipulated the lasers to form a square border. Pretty fun to watch. [15.5/20] Non-spell 3 : This non-spell can provide some beautiful danmaku, but sadly it ruined by the speed of familiar.Oh well, it's still good. [11.5/15] Passion Sign "Master Flare" The final spell is the weakest. Even though I do like the "Master Flare" effect here, I must say this spell is kinda bad. The screen shaking effect, combine with shiny bullets everywhere, making it impossible to see and dodge. [13/20] Overall, for the main boss fight you get 11.5 points out of 15 -Visual & Effect- (3 point) Visual look pretty, but stage background could use some work. There's no charge effect here, but I think you're fine without it already. [1.75/3] -Others (Difficulty,Aesthetics) - (2 point) Difficulty is clearly hard mode. (except final spell, which is lunatic) Almost every pattern is fair. Nice job. Music choice is questionable. I will leave that to individual,though. [1.25/2] Extra Credit (Stage,Midboss,Player,Gimmick,etc) (1 points). Don't seem to have any. ##### Final Score = 11.5+1.75+1.25 = 14.50 #####