RaNGE Danmaku Contest 14 ~ Popular Popularity! Contestant : Gizmo The Dragon Script : RaNGE Popular Popularity Entry: Momiji!! [1.8.0] (Momiji) Judged by TalosMistake My Judging Criteria Danmaku - Worth 15 points Visual & Effect - Worth 3 points Others (Difficulty,Aesthetics) - Worth 2 points Total Score = 20 // Extra Credit (Stage,Midboss,Player,Gimmick,etc) Worth 1 points. Will count to your final score Important Note I'm not a native english speaker,so I apologize in advance for any grammatical mistakes and/or uncleared words or phases I use. If you have any questions about my judging, feel free to PM me via MotK forum. <-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------> -Danmaku- (15 point) Non-spell 1 : Such a decent opening nonspell. [12/15] Tengu Blade "Claw of the White Wolf" I must say I love this. It give me the feeling of "White Wolf" very well, and it's the best spell in this script. [17.5/20] Non-spell 2 : Now this is such a big no-no. It's just a replicate version of non-spell 1 with the new pattern on the top (actually, it's from Double Spoiler). It looks very silly...and cheap. [7/15] Tengu Sign "White Wolf,Black Wolf" I didn't know Momiji can do something like this, oh well. Danmaku is fine, the "Illusion Momiji" should fire more danmaku,though. Right now, it's pretty lackluster. [14/20] Tengu Sign "Year of the Wolf-NewYear's Dawn-" This looks a lot like Suwako's survival spell card, suffering unoriginality, but it has some potential, and it suit Momiji. [14.5/20] I Had to do this "Yam of the Wolf -I'm So Sorry!-" What is this?. xD I don't have any idea about this meme, so let's move to danmaku. Momiji's shots are very brutal. They will definitely kill you on the first run (because 99% of player have no idea what to do) The...umm...Yam is ok, though. [13/20] Overall, for the main boss fight you get 10.64 points out of 15 -Visual & Effect- (3 point) Visual is ok. (Although, I'm surprise that you animated Tarumi sprite and left Momiji be a statue. Effect is ok,too. [1.5/3] -Others (Difficulty,Aesthetics) - (2 point) Difficulty is fair (except nonspell 2) Good choice for music [1/2] Extra Credit (Stage,Midboss,Player,Gimmick,etc) (1 points). At least you made 2 ending, one of them is pretty hilarious. [0.2/1] ##### Final Score = 10.64+1.5+1+0.2 = 13.34 #####