RaNGE Danmaku Contest 14 ~ Popular Popularity! Contestant : PhantomSong Script : RaNGE 14 ~ Aya Shameimaru by PhantomSong version 1 (Aya) Judged by TalosMistake My Judging Criteria Danmaku - Worth 15 points Visual & Effect - Worth 3 points Others (Difficulty,Aesthetics) - Worth 2 points Total Score = 20 // Extra Credit (Stage,Midboss,Player,Gimmick,etc) Worth 1 points. Will count to your final score Important Note I'm not a native english speaker,so I apologize in advance for any grammatical mistakes and/or uncleared words or phases I use. If you have any questions about my judging, feel free to PM me via MotK forum. <-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------> -Danmaku- (15 point) Non-spell 1 : A traditional non-spell card. It's done right, but I can't help but think it's still boring. [10/15] Wind God "Shinatobe's Elegant Waltz" The aimed bullets caught me off guard for the first time,but overall it's not that bad. In contrast, it's a good pattern once you know how to deal with it. [15/20] Non-spell 2 : Now this is something interesting. I've seen a pattern like this before, but this one also did its justice. [13/15] Storm Sign "Fujin's Cyclone" Wow, I must say I really like this. If you had done a bit of modification , I would have though zun made this. [18/20] Non-spell 3 : The pattern is ok here. Aimed bullets do a good job [12/15] Heaven Sign "Messenger of the Gods" Ah, I love when I graze those red bullets. They gave me a good feel. I also kinda like the part where she ran left-right to the screen. The butterfly spamming is not bad,too [16.5/20] "Tengu's Catastrophic Storm" At first I though this was a Meiling's pattern. x_x But it's ok, maybe I played EoSD too much. Anyway, a solid spell card, nothing particular to say here. [16/20] Overall, for the main boss fight you get 12.06 points out of 15 -Visual & Effect- (3 point) Visual is in a standard. (compare to others participants) Effect is not much, although not bad either. [1.75/3] -Others (Difficulty,Aesthetics) - (2 point) This script is very well-balanced, and very Aya-ish. Music is very fitting. I cannot give any better score here [2/2] Extra Credit (Stage,Midboss,Player,Gimmick,etc) (1 points). Don't seem to have any. ##### Final Score = 12.06+1.75+2 = 15.81 #####